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Vision Clear

Songs of love
Olympic doves
As if a smile
From above

Our human fear
After taste
Salty tears
Blush of fate

All hearts change
While some may cheer
You remain in vision clear

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16 Responses to “Vision Clear”

  1. poetryperspectives Says:
    February 14, 2010 at 4:23 pm

    Lovely! Want to give you a Happy Award

    Happy Award

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    • dustus Says:
      February 14, 2010 at 4:57 pm

      Thank you very much. How thoughtful! I’ll definitely post about it tomorrow. Hmm… what makes me happy? Foremost, kind gestures such as this one 🙂
      Cheers.
      Adam

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  2. slpmartin Says:
    February 14, 2010 at 8:25 pm

    As I read your verse…my mind could only see Nodar Kumaritashvili..vision clear..dreams defered…family in tears.

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  4. justmeshakira Says:
    February 15, 2010 at 5:40 am

    Really tragic , so young , such a waste.
    I cannot imagine.
    Life is indeed fragile.

    Have you a great week.

    hugs
    shakira

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  5. dustus Says:
    February 15, 2010 at 8:39 am

    My sentiments as well, shakira. Have an amazing week.
    Cheers.
    Adam

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  7. jingle Says:
    February 15, 2010 at 5:37 pm

    very impressive poem,
    I feel the natural flow..
    😉

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    • dustus Says:
      February 15, 2010 at 6:16 pm

      Hi jingle. I enjoy the musical quality of rhyme in poetry and fear sometimes I over do it. Thanks for stopping by 🙂

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  8. Doraz Says:
    February 16, 2010 at 12:20 pm

    I believe we should cherish every moment. 🙂

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  9. william Says:
    February 18, 2010 at 10:14 am

    hi friend, william here from jingles rally, excellent poem friend, loved the imagery, well constructed, bravo..my poem is up 🙂

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    • dustus Says:
      February 18, 2010 at 10:25 am

      Hi William. Thank you, friend. I’ll be taking part in the rally a little later today and look forward to reading your new post.
      Cheers 🙂

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  10. Jaymie Says:
    February 18, 2010 at 2:24 pm

    Emotions and clear vision…oh to have both at the same time! Enjoyed this, thanks!

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