Your Heart

Not simple
So to speak
Mistaking silence
For being weak

Tessellations, code in streams
Summer breezy tease of spring

Self-conscious
Sadly fumbling
Johnny Cash
Fire ring
Writing flood
I am dumb
When in feeling
Born to Run
Beaming ducts
Pumping blood
Oxygen
Morning sun
Birds in song
Her smile won
Skipping time
Complete as one

20 Responses to “Your Heart”

  1. i like what you did with this in the last half.

  2. Thanks. Good to learn you’re back and feeling refreshed.

  3. Your words all flow together like a song! I love it! 🙂 Have a fun week.

  4. Wow. There is so much packed into this poem. I had to read it at least twice. Thanks for sharing this.

  5. Thank you, Doraz and Yousei. Glad to share my work 🙂

  6. Dearest Adam,

    What a lovely, lovely piece.
    I can feel your words.
    I am truly impressed.
    Thank you so much for sharing.

    Here from Jingle.
    Come join us for JINGLE THURSDAY POET RALLY.
    hugs
    shakira
    http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com

    • Thanks, shakira. I was just at jingle’s blog. That sounds like fun, and it’s really nice to be included in that. hugs

  7. SPOTLIGHT AWARD FOR YA! CONGRATS!

  8. Hello friend, pleased to meet you, thanks for popping over to my blog and for your kind comment, I really like your blog, and in particular this poem, excellent imagery friend, glad you have also won awards I myself have been very lucky as well, keep writin 🙂

  9. that last parts runs quick like a river…and i enjoyed it…

  10. moondustwriter Says:

    “Not simple” says it all. 🙂

  11. the poem reads like a soft and beautiful song!
    cool post!
    😉

  12. Hi This is great! I like how you managed to get some song titles in there. The rythym just flowed, very naturally! Enjoyed that thanks!

  13. oh My…
    that was breath-takingly beautiful..
    really loved the way you have described the heart…
    the pic was simply marvelous… well gelled in with the poem..
    never knew that just 2 word sentences could make such an impact too…

    got ur link from Jingle’s blog..
    you can check out my thursday poem too…
    http://megzone.wordpress.com

  14. Wow, thanks so much. Pleased to meet you, and glad I visited your blog. I just left a comment; excellent posts! http://megzone.wordpress.com
    Cheers.
    Adam

  15. I’d like to nominate you for the Sunshine Award. Please go to my page for the image to post to you account, if you accept. Also, please pass this forward to 12 talented poets you choose.

    If you want to see more on this award, check out Jingle’s page http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/.

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