Where do you go when the world splits?
Do you find a beginning or end to it?
Among verdant boughs budding jest
An illusive flood through optic glass
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*photo by me
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April 23, 2010 at 3:37 pm
Beautifully done Dustus. Your words painted pictures in my mind as I read each line. Also the picture gave your poem a special touch.
http://billmanson.blogspot.com/ new poem posted by viola.
April 23, 2010 at 3:47 pm
Enjoyed your poem, Viola. I like the site too. Thanks 🙂
April 23, 2010 at 4:21 pm
a poem born out of a rich imagination to yield vivid imagery.well done Adam.
April 23, 2010 at 4:24 pm
Thank you, Sir. Always appreciate your kind words and feeback.
Cheers, wordwand. Have a great weekend
April 23, 2010 at 4:49 pm
verdant places
seem all I have
when the world
cracks apart.
green love
inspiring, Adam!!
xo
April 23, 2010 at 5:04 pm
Awesome reply! Thanks so much Jannie 🙂
April 23, 2010 at 4:56 pm
Thank you Adam for reading my poem.
April 23, 2010 at 5:01 pm
my pleasure. Have a great weekend!
April 23, 2010 at 7:11 pm
your visual and poem work so well together. Making the mind and eyes ponder ‘where do you go?”
thanks my friend
April 24, 2010 at 7:29 am
Thanks, Leslie. I run past those woods just about everday and wanted to take a photo since all the snow flooded it out. Kept questioning how the camera would handle the reflections mid-day… glad you like it.
April 23, 2010 at 7:47 pm
this is so amazing,
super beautiful photo,
cool lines…
Happy Friday!
April 24, 2010 at 7:31 am
Happy Saturday! Excuse my tardy reply.
Thanks, Ji.
April 23, 2010 at 10:22 pm
awesome…. simply superb…
im running out of words to express the beauty of the poem Adam…
its breath-takingly beautiful
April 24, 2010 at 7:33 am
LOL I don’t think you could run out of words, Megz. Your command of language(s) far exceeds mine. Cheers. Have a great weekend 🙂
April 24, 2010 at 3:10 pm
Wow, the photograph is outstanding. You must enjoy your runs in the woodland.
April 25, 2010 at 7:10 am
I run past that spot all the time and can see it from the sidewalk. Seems like no matter what time of day, there are always vivid reflections there.
April 25, 2010 at 2:30 pm
Must be a great place to go. I often visit the woods near my home and take photos of the scenery.
April 24, 2010 at 3:49 pm
you start with a great question that can be very metaphorical and then paint it together wonderfully. nice one.
April 25, 2010 at 7:13 am
Thanks. It seemed natural to begin with a question on this one; trying to make sense of the visual overload.
April 24, 2010 at 7:23 pm
You have managed to get me to say … “WOW!”
🙂
April 25, 2010 at 7:14 am
Glad to hear it. Hope you’re having a great weekend, D 🙂
April 24, 2010 at 9:27 pm
three poetry awards,
hot blog award,
more…
April 25, 2010 at 7:15 am
Excellent! Congrats to everyone 🙂
April 25, 2010 at 9:06 am
Thank you so much for putting in your link.Helps me and others to do catchup!
WOW.. I almost miss this..
What a gem!
You know , FLOODING is such a SURREAL problem in Asia.
You painted adequate and eloquent words to go with a subtle but amazing picture, Adam!
Bravo.
Have you a great Sunday!
hugs
shakira
April 25, 2010 at 9:20 am
Thanks, shakira. I cannot imagine the horror of having your community destroyed by a flood. I watched the damage in New Orleans, but I am far removed from that area too. Devastatingly sad. Thanks for sharing your comment. hugs
April 25, 2010 at 1:49 pm
Me got tribute, awards and nominations
here and
here
hugs
shakira
April 25, 2010 at 5:29 pm
Thanks shakira. Much appreciated 🙂
April 25, 2010 at 3:49 pm
I like it though i thought the world had already split. lol
April 25, 2010 at 4:26 pm
LOL I guess I wasn’t sure.
April 26, 2010 at 9:13 am
5 awards on the bottom,
enjoy some!
April 26, 2010 at 10:28 am
Thank you 🙂 That’s very thoughtful.
April 27, 2010 at 11:17 am
well i am a staunch optimist…. so…
🙂
April 27, 2010 at 11:20 am
…so you perceive a beginning… Me too 🙂
April 28, 2010 at 10:36 am
How are you?
the perfect poet award logos are changed, it is kind of messy this week, winners feel free to pick any one of those, including previous week logos to display…this is for your information!
thank you.
make sure to nominate one poet for week 16. thanks a million!
😉
April 28, 2010 at 10:41 am
Doing very well, Jingle. Hope you are too. Kind of a messy week for me as well. I should have everything good-to-go for tomorrow though. 😉
April 29, 2010 at 5:03 am
‘An illusive flood through optic glass’ what a great line Adam! really illustrates this image – and what a great photograph you take! The optical illusion in the pic is almost seamless – great:)
April 29, 2010 at 6:29 am
Hi Lynda! The near seamlessness is my favorite aspect of the pic. (Props to Canon for making great cameras). Hope to take plenty more photos in the next few weeks, with a couple of surprises. TY
🙂