Endgame

Piece turns over
My thoughtless fault
Conceding time
To feeling lost

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21 Responses to “Endgame”

  1. Adam this is awesome, just simply awesome. Thank you for the birthday wishes. I am growing old gracefully. LOL

  2. You are awesome, Viola. Enjoy your day ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. very short but empowering one!
    Happy Thursday!
    ๐Ÿ˜‰

  4. Thanks Jingle. Glad this one has that effect for you. Must admit this poem makes me feel sad

  5. Short and sweet……….good one,

    Peace,
    Laz

  6. dustus Says:

    Thanks. Enjoying the poetry on your blog…

    Short and sweet /
    Did make me think

    http://lazfreedman.wordpress.com/

  7. When does one know that they are finished “thinking?” things over in life, huh? Have a great day/ ๐Ÿ™‚ Smile.

  8. Hey Doraz!
    Answer: when words you think innocuous hurt unwittingly.

  9. very touching and wise.

  10. Thanks, trisha ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. moondustwriter Says:

    Wow that one makes my thoughts go all over the place
    missed your post yesterday

    • I like when writing does that, though must say wasn’t trying for that this time. Thanks for checking the blog yesterday, Leslie

  12. When I was in graduate school, I would play chess every Sunday with my major professor…this poem reminds me of those days …how thoughtless actions resulted in an awareness that it was time to consede the match…life often has such moments also…well said my friend.

  13. The time you spend in self reflection is it wasted? Or procrastination? As long as it helps you move forward. A little sad Adam but very deep.

  14. Good points, Shan. Time to move forward. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. you’re good at capturing something in just a few words.
    Nice one

  16. Thank you. Enjoyed your song… http://artswebshow.com/

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