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Rocky mountain gristThis entry was posted on October 11, 2010 at 6:09 am and is filed under haiku with tags dustus, Haiku, online poems, poem, Poetry, poetry online. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.
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October 11, 2010 at 7:05 am
Very well done, I have yet to attempt a haiku.
October 11, 2010 at 7:37 am
Then you must give it a shot! It’s a fun form that challenges. Often twitter is a good source to search for new haiku 🙂
October 11, 2010 at 9:58 am
Rocky mountain grist….then the slowing down of the wings before landing! Very Good Adam:)
October 11, 2010 at 10:17 am
Hi Lynda. Have a wonderful week! Looking forward to your next poetry challenge! hint hint 😉
October 11, 2010 at 10:40 am
Beautifully done my friend. Hugs Vi
October 11, 2010 at 10:45 am
Your visit makes me smile, Vi. Hope all is going well 🙂
October 11, 2010 at 4:27 pm
Enjoyed your haiku …well done.
October 11, 2010 at 4:46 pm
Thank you, Charles. Your work is inspiring.
October 11, 2010 at 6:01 pm
Dustus,
Bravo. This is one of your best haiku yet. I love haiku because of its rooting in nature, but this one is especially wonderful since I live in the Rocky Mountains and know so well the imagery you have chosen. Light and Great Haiku.
October 12, 2010 at 7:23 am
I have a cousin who lives out in Colorado. She raves about the Rocky Mountains. Unfortunately, I have never seen them—the mountains that is. Glad you enjoyed the haiku, Suzie
October 11, 2010 at 6:07 pm
i do appreciate reading a good haiku.
Your’s is great.
Nice one Adam
October 12, 2010 at 7:24 am
Hey K. Been enjoying your video readings.
October 12, 2010 at 12:58 am
You can write anything on this planet and I’ll just melt…it is seriously a good one Adam…Images evoked so very beautiful..Hugs xx
October 12, 2010 at 7:29 am
Hi Amanda. THANK YOU! I’d really like to finish writing more books, in addition to blogging of course 🙂 However, it’s no big secret that I know I’ve a few novels in me… would relish the chance to share them if given an opportunity!
October 12, 2010 at 7:33 am
a wondeful picture you painted today adam…being a nature freak…it was majestic
October 12, 2010 at 7:55 am
Hey Bri. I live for the outdoors, especially the mountains.
See you on the trail later—the One Shot commenting trail 🙂
October 12, 2010 at 9:00 am
I can picture it! That is what is so wonderful about “good” haiku.
October 12, 2010 at 9:12 am
Excellent, Leslie. So glad this one conjures images. TY 🙂
October 13, 2010 at 10:32 am
absolutely fabulous.
October 13, 2010 at 11:09 am
Hey trisha. Thanks for stopping by, my friend 🙂
October 13, 2010 at 2:45 pm
I love how you let the eagle enter the poem the same way it enters the scene – not there at all, then suddenly massive but unresolved, and finally the magnificent bird at rest. A terrific use of the three-line structure and a wonderful depiction of the wild bird!
October 13, 2010 at 4:40 pm
Appreciate your comment and enjoy your description of the poem. Cheers.
October 13, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Great, very vivid in so few words.