For Claudia’s iPhone Picture Prompt Challenge: Haiku

This post is for the One Shoot Photography Sunday Challenge:
*Claudia’s iPhone picture prompt inspired the following haiku:

Summer glowing held
Diaphanous curtains swim
iPhonic tuned light

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*Check out Claudia’s iPhone Picture Prompt Challenge @
One Stop Poetry

54 Responses to “For Claudia’s iPhone Picture Prompt Challenge: Haiku”

  1. TY! Hope you’re enjoying the weekend 🙂

  2. […] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Adam Dustus, StevenMGrant. StevenMGrant said: RT @Dustus: For Claudia's iPhone Picture Prompt Challenge: Haiku: http://wp.me/pnd9L-1N8 […]

  3. moondustwriter Says:

    une Autre One Shoot!!!

    nice with the phone in there

    splendid

  4. Thanks for taking part in OS today 🙂

  5. aahhhh – steve would be proud…smiles

  6. Hi, I’m a Mac… Lol Fantastic shots, Claudia. Smiles

  7. Very clever! A modern touch to the haiku!

  8. Beautiful shot . Hello Dustus, I do pray you are having a great weekend. Hugs Viola

  9. I had to get my dictionary out to find out what diaphanous meant. LOL I now love the line ‘Diaphanous curtains swim.’

  10. Hahah cool! I took a different approach to the summer tired, moreover focusing on summer’s heat, which I could relate with. Here’s mine http://www.thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com

  11. I love that word for some reason, perhaps the sound of it. lol TY, Ann 🙂

  12. Captured the look well in the word diaphanous and brought it round with iphonic – crisp!

  13. H John. Enjoy the rest of the weekend!

  14. Definitely, I like. Always impressed with the exquisite discipline of good haiku.

  15. it is an “exquisite discipline.” Well said, Joanne. It’s become one of my favorite forms over the last few months—always a humbling challenge to practice. Thanks for stopping by 🙂

  16. I also enjoyed you haiku!

  17. I especially liked the middle line

  18. I think this photo is a great prompt! The color and shape are just beautiful. Your line about swimming curtains is perfect, Adam.

  19. fabulous Adam!

    Shubho bijoyadashami (Happy Vijayadashami)! May the blessings of the Goddess shower down on you and your loved ones forever.

  20. Aww thanks so much, trisha 🙂 Happy Vijayadashami!

  21. A great read! Well written! I too am a diaphanous word lover!!

    Wysteria

  22. LOL. Appreciate your kind words, Wysteria 🙂

  23. Loved it very much 🙂 xxx

  24. Always glad when you approve, Amanda. 🙂 Thank you

  25. lovely!

  26. ladynimue Says:

    duh ! i read it already but seems i forgot to comment 😐

    Lovely haiku dustus !! This actually inspired my own post 🙂

  27. That’s really cool. Thanks, ladynimue! Always enjoy visiting your site 🙂

  28. betweenhearts75 Says:

    Very cool!!! “Iphonic” love that!!!! 🙂 ~ Now someone needs to come up with a “creative writer’s dictionary” of the bunches of fascinating words designed in poetry, haiku and general creative writing. Or is Iphonic a real word, darn maybe I need to look that up, I’ve never heard of…..lol. ;D ~ Great job Adam! ~ 🙂 April

  29. Not sure if the word has any standard definition, April. I just googled “iphonic” and it returned 134,000 instances of it for various things. I had no idea. lol That’s a cool idea about a creative writer’s dictionary, especially now with so many technology-influenced terms 🙂 Cheers

  30. Great Haiku.
    I seemed to lose my way last Weds as no-one popped over to mine from the One Stop crowd, so hopefully I’m back on track.
    I love your haiku ‘button’, where did you get it? :O)

    • Sorry to hear nobody stopped by, Madeleine. That’s not right. Sorry, still working out the OS format…. The button I made in Photoshop once I found the characters.

  31. First of all, I love the photo with the writer’s block caption. So guess we turn around and go the other way.
    Took me a while to figure out the i-phone photo but your haiku saved me.
    Victoria

  32. Thanks for stopping by, Victoria. I definitely will be turning around 🙂

  33. smiles KB

  34. Loved the “iPhonic”. I’m so totally going to steal that word! (Obviously, I’m an iPhone addict…) This was a great haiku! Thanks so much for your visit to Life is Good and your insightful comment. I too hope things change…that rant was spawned by an ongoing feud between my insurance company idiots and my doctors…sigh.

  35. Thanks, Tina. The word’s all yours. lol I’m an iPad addict myself 🙂

  36. tricky. indo haiku. sweet!

  37. Diaphanous curtains swim…….
    This invokes the Isley brothers ‘Summer Breeze’ to me Adam! Love it:)

  38. Nice! I like that song, Lynda 🙂

  39. Diaphanous…love that word.

  40. Inventive & creative! Cool.

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