4Lines: No Mirror

When thoughts empty echo hunger
And lethargic being replaces thunder
Wonder did you ever ponder?
…No mirror could reflect you fonder

 

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17 Responses to “4Lines: No Mirror”

  1. Nicely written four lines my friend. Your 4 lines say more than people say in many lines. I really like the last line, “No mirror could reflect you fonder.” Just simply wonderful. Hugs and Love Viola

  2. 4 words…Your beautiful soul reflected.
    Look deeper….
    ~Shell

  3. Love the sound of it – it should be read aloud. Perfect.

  4. Thanks, Neha. I enjoy reading my work aloud. However, I don’t always have time to do so, especially lately. One Shot Wednesday is usually when I’ll post a recording (Flash 55s for the most part too)—when I don’t have Writer’s Block. lol Cheers

  5. The depth of your soul shines in your 4 lines Adam, it is amazing how with so little words you say much more then a thousand..:)
    pierced my mind..as i am looking in my mirror right now..:)

    *smiling* turning away from the mirror now..:)

  6. An interesting poem to start my day with over morning coffee…always find your poems quite reflective.

  7. Enjoy your coffee, Charles. Have a nice weekend:)

  8. You really are an amazing poet and photographer.

    Just love this word combo! Enigmatic.

    xo

  9. Hey Jannie! Hope all’s well and you’re rocking and rolling🙂 Enjoy the weekend

  10. Love this. Have jotted it down. Even the sound of the words leave me relaxed.

  11. Awesome. Thanks always, Leslie🙂 Weekends should be for relaxing, though I must admit I was quite agitated when I wrote this one.

  12. …No mirror could reflect you fonder
    Thats a magical line Adam! This reads like a riddle – fascinating:-)

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  14. That line did it for me too …you are sooooooooo clever Adam!! Hope you had a good weekend xxx

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