4Lines: Hurt Humbling
Having nothing sure does prove
Salted wounds will scream through gloom
Breathless, suggestive, invectives digested
Hurt humbling and I just don’t deserve you
Having nothing sure does prove
Salted wounds will scream through gloom
Breathless, suggestive, invectives digested
Hurt humbling and I just don’t deserve you
November 20, 2010 at 11:31 am
Beautifully written 🙂
November 20, 2010 at 11:37 am
I wrote a Palindrome poem the other day that I plan to post soon, which was inspired by you & your explication of the form—wonderful work, my friend 🙂
November 20, 2010 at 11:38 am
Excellent write Adam. Hugs Vi
November 20, 2010 at 12:07 pm
Hugs, Vi. Enjoy your weekend, my friend 🙂
November 20, 2010 at 11:53 am
Incredible four-lines dear friend. Quite an impact. 🙂 Something grand from the “nothing” pulls through the words…. ~April
November 20, 2010 at 12:12 pm
Really like this. Makes me think of someone who will rise up and succeed in the end!
November 20, 2010 at 2:06 pm
oops. Usually your comments show right up, Leslie. WordPress is acting funny again. Real success is also a feeling of knowing you’ve done your best, and I hope your prediction proves true. Thanks, my friend 🙂
Ever think of offering one of your amazing paintings up as a writing prompt to inspire others? hint hint. lol
Cheers 🙂
November 20, 2010 at 4:56 pm
There are a few writers who have asked to use my images for what they have written. You are welcome to any if you would like to offer a prompt. Just e-mail me which one and I will send you the jpeg., Adam.
November 20, 2010 at 12:12 pm
Thank you, April. Hope the writing continues to go well for you. I want to try my hand at novel contest but too late. Still, all my friends are doing it. lol 🙂
November 20, 2010 at 4:48 pm
NIce poem, and well written.
November 20, 2010 at 5:30 pm
Very strong for so few lines…well said.
November 20, 2010 at 10:13 pm
Thanks Lawrence and Charles.
November 20, 2010 at 10:08 pm
sad and so much said and yet leaves me wondering at the same time about how it all turns out…great one, adam!
November 20, 2010 at 10:16 pm
Sheila was wonderful getting to know you through the spotlight. Cheers, my friend 🙂