He thinks she might know
Her love waits upon rocky beach
For reason unseen standing there
Alone before they meet
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*the above photo is by the great Andy Ilachinski
He is featured today @ One Stop Poetry
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November 6, 2010 at 11:58 pm
Wonderful image to go with the poem…both are very well crafted….very fine job my friend on both.
November 7, 2010 at 11:07 am
Hope you’re having a most excellent Sunday, my friend 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 2:08 am
Beautiful imagery in your words enhancing the fabulous image in the photo.
November 7, 2010 at 11:08 am
Glad you like. Truly, some inspiring photography this week.
November 7, 2010 at 3:32 am
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November 7, 2010 at 5:59 am
Lovely poem, and it makes the picture come alive, knowing why he was alone on the beach.
November 7, 2010 at 11:09 am
I love that picture. Wrote four short poems for the prompt! (3 weren’t so good lol)
November 7, 2010 at 6:36 am
beautiful Dustus…
November 7, 2010 at 6:48 am
Your poem encompasses the vastness of possibilities.
November 7, 2010 at 2:52 pm
the sky in the photo definitely prompts me to think of “vastness.” Thanks, nice take on it.
November 7, 2010 at 7:15 am
Adam do you know why I like reading your poems? It is because your words are few, but say so much. Beautiful image, both poem and picture.
November 7, 2010 at 11:10 am
smiles, Viola. Thank you
November 7, 2010 at 8:02 am
smiles. like another i read on this is am torn between finding each other for the first time and in the after before finding each other in eternity again…nice dustus!
November 7, 2010 at 9:45 am
your words display the peaceful expectation ot the photo..lots going on beneath the surface
November 7, 2010 at 10:19 am
Enjoyed reading this. Romantic.
November 7, 2010 at 10:37 am
Lovely! — peaceful expectation expressed beautiful.
November 7, 2010 at 11:11 am
Thanks for your comments, Everyone. glad people are enjoying taking part in the great prompt today!
November 7, 2010 at 11:41 am
Alone before they meet – such unexpected calmness in those words. Love it 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 12:41 pm
Thanks also for the shout out on Twitter 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 12:15 pm
With so few words you mirror the mystery I see in this photo. Blessings.
November 7, 2010 at 2:48 pm
tyvm… enjoy the rest of Sunday 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 12:31 pm
Hard to compress all that emotional nuance into a few phrases. Your style is unique, and effective I think because it seems your natural voice and as if no one else quite speaks that way.
November 7, 2010 at 2:53 pm
Sincere thanks.
November 7, 2010 at 12:39 pm
hi adam…the photo was such a draw….your words work perfectly with this picture…excellent stuff my friend
November 7, 2010 at 12:43 pm
thanks, buddy. It’s awesome to sit back and watch you at the top of your game. Your last crop of posts have been fierce. Congrats, Pete. Write On!
November 7, 2010 at 12:50 pm
Love the scripted poem, beautifully presented and well-crafted words. The title gives the poem a bit of a haunting flavour.
November 7, 2010 at 1:34 pm
Good way of putting it. I find love haunting at times. TY 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 1:21 pm
Beautiful words to coincide with a beautiful picture. Short but sweet–calm but with a twinge of longing. Lovely.
November 7, 2010 at 1:36 pm
Nice work again today, Chris. I think people are beginning to realize your hard work. Smiles on a great One Shoot, brother.
November 7, 2010 at 1:55 pm
I like the way everyone has their own take on one photograph. Thank you for sharing Adam. Very poigniant.
November 7, 2010 at 2:50 pm
Learned that you are an accomplished poet in your native tongue. Glad to see you posting again, shan I’m still a fan 🙂
November 9, 2010 at 9:25 am
I hope you haven’t googled me, that could be rather embarrassing! Not so much accomplished as practiced, and English is a whole different ball game 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 2:51 pm
lovely Dustus ~ great write on a great pic ~ loved the interview some very interesting photography ~ enjoyed this
November 8, 2010 at 8:24 am
Glad you enjoyed the Sunday festivities 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 3:40 pm
There is such hypnotic simplicity in the image of ‘alone before they meet’.
Thanks for dropping by my place and leaving a comment!
November 8, 2010 at 8:25 am
Thanks for taking part. I’m already looking forward to next week’s prompt.
November 7, 2010 at 4:38 pm
I love the wanting and waiting undertone to this poem. There’s something seductive about the words and image. I was compelled to read it again and again. Well done!
November 8, 2010 at 8:26 am
Excellent. Thanks for re-reading it. I like when poems prompt me to do that too 🙂
November 7, 2010 at 5:32 pm
I like the rhyme, and the complex syntax. Good stuff.
November 8, 2010 at 8:27 am
Good of you to point out the syntax on this one. Cheers
November 7, 2010 at 11:48 pm
lovely thoughts of knowing…we all know don’t we when someone loves us…bkm
November 8, 2010 at 8:28 am
Must admit, I’m kind of clueless sometimes. lol
November 8, 2010 at 12:12 pm
~I so enjoyed taking part and reading everyones wonderful writes here ~ your wonderful write reminds what’s never known around the corner ~ have a great week Dustus ~ *heartsmiles* Lib
November 8, 2010 at 12:25 pm
tried to post the link for onestoppoetry on my blog Dustus if you drop by I wonder if you could post the link many thanks Lib *heartsiles*
November 28, 2010 at 2:55 pm
your writes are always powerful … beautifully compliments the picture.