Not simple
So to speak
Mistaking silence
For being weak
Tessellations, code in streams
Summer breezy tease of spring
Self-conscious
Sadly fumbling
Johnny Cash
Fire ring
Writing flood
I am dumb
When in feeling
Born to Run
Beaming ducts
Pumping blood
Oxygen
Morning sun
Birds in song
Her smile won
Skipping time
Complete as one
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February 16, 2010 at 6:52 pm
i like what you did with this in the last half.
February 16, 2010 at 7:26 pm
Thanks. Good to learn you’re back and feeling refreshed.
February 16, 2010 at 9:53 pm
Your words all flow together like a song! I love it! 🙂 Have a fun week.
February 16, 2010 at 11:30 pm
Wow. There is so much packed into this poem. I had to read it at least twice. Thanks for sharing this.
February 17, 2010 at 8:17 am
Thank you, Doraz and Yousei. Glad to share my work 🙂
February 17, 2010 at 11:58 am
Dearest Adam,
What a lovely, lovely piece.
I can feel your words.
I am truly impressed.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Here from Jingle.
Come join us for JINGLE THURSDAY POET RALLY.
hugs
shakira
http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com
February 17, 2010 at 12:16 pm
Thanks, shakira. I was just at jingle’s blog. That sounds like fun, and it’s really nice to be included in that. hugs
February 17, 2010 at 5:58 pm
SPOTLIGHT AWARD FOR YA! CONGRATS!
February 17, 2010 at 6:54 pm
Such a nice gesture, Doraz. Thank you. I’m humbled.
February 17, 2010 at 9:25 pm
Hello friend, pleased to meet you, thanks for popping over to my blog and for your kind comment, I really like your blog, and in particular this poem, excellent imagery friend, glad you have also won awards I myself have been very lucky as well, keep writin 🙂
February 17, 2010 at 11:47 pm
that last parts runs quick like a river…and i enjoyed it…
February 18, 2010 at 7:52 am
Thanks for visiting, Brian. Glad you liked the poem and appreciate the comment. Cheers
February 18, 2010 at 12:59 am
“Not simple” says it all. 🙂
February 18, 2010 at 5:24 am
the poem reads like a soft and beautiful song!
cool post!
😉
February 18, 2010 at 7:47 am
Hi Jingle! Look forward to participating in the rally today. Thanks 🙂
February 18, 2010 at 10:21 am
Hi This is great! I like how you managed to get some song titles in there. The rythym just flowed, very naturally! Enjoyed that thanks!
February 18, 2010 at 10:33 am
Thank you. I really enjoyed visiting your blog and look forward to reading more posts.
http://echostains.wordpress.com/
Adam 🙂
February 18, 2010 at 11:36 am
oh My…
that was breath-takingly beautiful..
really loved the way you have described the heart…
the pic was simply marvelous… well gelled in with the poem..
never knew that just 2 word sentences could make such an impact too…
got ur link from Jingle’s blog..
you can check out my thursday poem too…
http://megzone.wordpress.com
February 18, 2010 at 12:25 pm
Wow, thanks so much. Pleased to meet you, and glad I visited your blog. I just left a comment; excellent posts! http://megzone.wordpress.com
Cheers.
Adam
February 18, 2010 at 4:09 pm
I’d like to nominate you for the Sunshine Award. Please go to my page for the image to post to you account, if you accept. Also, please pass this forward to 12 talented poets you choose.
If you want to see more on this award, check out Jingle’s page http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/.