“Shadorma is a 6 line poem (sestet) of Spanish descent with no set rhyme scheme. The shadorma is a syllabic poem with the following structure: 3/5/3/3/7/5″
I think I just had a Kool Aid flashback. Your poem fits the goofy but cheerful image perfectly. Not of course, that you’re goofy or anything…Nice one, adam. I liked.
Had to Google Kool-aid Man, couldn’t remember him. Love your happy choice in this, but I paused on breakthrough… (as you intended); so many thoughts flow fast through that breach. Can get deep there. Love it!
Such a fun poem, Adam! I love that last line. Truth is, your poem is what inspired me to try out Shadorma! Thanks so much for this wonderful space and your poems.
The above poem, in Shadorma form, was written for One Stop Poetry’s Sunday Picture Prompt Challenge. Chris G. took over and Lansing-graffitied the post for today. Check it out at One Stop Poetry. 
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June 18, 2011 at 11:13 pm
Short and sweet.
Nice poetry 🙂
June 18, 2011 at 11:21 pm
Glad you liked it
June 18, 2011 at 11:40 pm
What a fun poem! Took me back to the old kool aid ads!
June 19, 2011 at 12:39 am
Freedom to express our views in any format either writing, graffiti, poem or otherwise should not come under any conditions…. He lives on.
June 19, 2011 at 12:47 am
Sweet piece! Making light of a sometimes volatile topic.
June 19, 2011 at 1:11 am
I think I just had a Kool Aid flashback. Your poem fits the goofy but cheerful image perfectly. Not of course, that you’re goofy or anything…Nice one, adam. I liked.
June 19, 2011 at 3:03 am
Fun work.
June 19, 2011 at 5:11 am
Short and fun and you picked up the words well. Nice.
June 19, 2011 at 6:06 am
Lovely work full of fun
June 19, 2011 at 6:31 am
Koolaid breakthrough…nice he grew up! that’s rasta baby!
June 19, 2011 at 6:58 am
So the Kool-Aid guy is as “kool” as he looks.. Fun poem..Liked your take on this!!
June 19, 2011 at 7:11 am
peace!…yay…love the ray bans …cool shadorma adam
June 19, 2011 at 7:26 am
i’ve only ever met one carrot who could play saxophone. well okay, it was this red haired dude.
June 19, 2011 at 7:34 am
Ha! Mr. Kool-Aid! (The yellow punch flavor?) You nailed that one, Adam.
June 19, 2011 at 8:01 am
made me smile.
June 19, 2011 at 8:43 am
Like the light tone of the poem…was fun to read.
June 19, 2011 at 8:53 am
love it! love, love the shadorma, sometimes i think in that meter 🙂
also, fair trade kool-aid? i’d buy that.
June 19, 2011 at 9:45 am
Short and sweet 🙂 nice and happy!
June 19, 2011 at 11:26 am
ha, he does look like mr koolaid….nice play adam…
June 19, 2011 at 12:00 pm
it truly looks like the Kool-Aid guy….nice take peace and Ray Bans…bkm
June 19, 2011 at 12:23 pm
I always thought kool-aid was nasty, but this poem tastes good 🙂
June 19, 2011 at 1:15 pm
Kool poem. 😉 It has that hot childhood summer feeling.
June 19, 2011 at 4:00 pm
Takes me back to the old commercials, breakin’ through the wall; peace ~
June 19, 2011 at 5:44 pm
Adore that you show homage to Kool Aid in your piece! I love it! Short, sweet and summer fun all wrapped up in poetry. Much enjoyed! ~ Rose
June 19, 2011 at 6:58 pm
Kool-aid man has one thing to say on this matter…Oh yeah! Heh. Fine work Dustus!
June 19, 2011 at 7:20 pm
Sweet like Mr. Koolaid himself =) Thank you for including info on form Adam. I am learning!
June 19, 2011 at 9:48 pm
lovin the Koolaid man!
June 20, 2011 at 10:35 am
Had to Google Kool-aid Man, couldn’t remember him. Love your happy choice in this, but I paused on breakthrough… (as you intended); so many thoughts flow fast through that breach. Can get deep there. Love it!
June 20, 2011 at 4:30 pm
Too Kool!!
Hope all is well Mr. D
June 21, 2011 at 10:44 am
Such a fun poem, Adam! I love that last line. Truth is, your poem is what inspired me to try out Shadorma! Thanks so much for this wonderful space and your poems.
June 22, 2011 at 11:56 pm
Fun poem. By coincidence, I wrote a Kool-Aid related limerick yesterday: Fried What???
June 23, 2011 at 11:50 am
Such a fun read!
fruits dance on the walls